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SilentJohn

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This is awesome.

It makes me want to hear the original, even though it's (Russian?).

Ethalyn responds:

Norwegian! XD Thanks anywhos man ;)

Perfection.

You are quite possibly the best voice actress I've heard on Newgrounds, and possibly PERIOD. If I were better at flash and had money, I would hire you for a series. Not even joking.

Absolutely epic.

I've haven't really heard songs with lyrics here on newgrounds, not good ones anyway... But this is epic and that's all I have to say.

It's not too bad.

You could have varied the beat a bit more. It's a nice beat, but it's too repetitive. And I think you need something like an orchestra placed in the background--something that gives it a darker feel. And also, this could be longer.

But yeah, this is pretty bland as is.

Excellent!

Awesome. The changes seem kinda subtle but that's a good thing. The piano sounds PERFECT. You should do the rest of the song now. :)

chucktownbluv responds:

Thank you! If by subtle you mean "Wow, I love all the instrumentation you added to a song that's composed entirely of a voice through a harmonizer", then yes it's pretty subtle.

ME A DONKEY ASS????!!!

But anyway fantastic job. The stutters were PERFECT. XD

uhm...

Well, it's not the best, but certainly not worth a 0 (coughs "douchebag" towards the guy below). Oh and don't try to do male voices again. The 7 year old voice was the only good one here, and it was pretty good actually. Then, as soon as you said "That little brat"....everything went downhill from there. Stick to the little girl voices, okay?

snowfender responds:

hi! thanks for the comment! =) i really appreciated your honesty.

i'm not going to stick to just little girls, because i do want to try to expand my range. i know i'm not great at all my voices yet, and that's why i want to keep trying! but thank you for the comment, i have been working on my little girl voice for a really long time now and i could never do it because i have a lower voice <3

Yeah what he said XD

I honestly couldn't tell you how to improve this (but then of course, I'm not that great)....but still, great song. Not too repetitive. It's original, unique, awesome.

Dj-Brand0 responds:

Thanks for the rate and review! It's alright you don't have to be great :D lol.
Thanks heaps

-Cheers Brando

eh...

Okay so the intro riff was alright; unique, sounds original. But as soon as the song started up... idk. It just sounds like WAY OFF. I'm not sure how to describe it: it's like having my head mauled by a horde of demons. I think that changing that gross...(idk Organ? TechOrchestra?) a little bit so it, you know, IS IN THE SAME KEY AS THE MELODY that's playing. Oh, and you need a real ending, not just a fade-out. Otherwise, this does have potential of being a good song.

And yeah the melody does sound good, that's probably the one thing you SHOULDN'T change other than the intro.

>:c

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